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Lisa Strader's avatar

Thank you for these-- I especially love the second one! Here's mine:

Dandelions break

up through the choking asphalt

with a laughing smile.

The crocuses know

exactly how long to wait:

unfurl in purple.

Amara Lynch's avatar

Thank you, Bethaney for this beautiful offering and invitation. I too have been playing with haiku lately and appreciate it for the same reasons you described. Here’s mine for spring:

Look! A daffodil!

No winter lasts forever.

We smile through our tears.

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